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There’s no way you would know
what you do to me.
Steal my breath like an undertow
and bring me to my knees.
The very mention of your name
makes obvious my desire.
Can’t help but think that you’re to blame
when I’m caught in this fire.

I really am a simple girl
caught up in this heat whirl
that everyone says is love.
The moment we’re apart for long
my memory starts to sing this song
and all I hear is:

“Melt me”
Embrace my heart,
and don’t let it go.
“Melt me”
Wrap me up,
but take it slow.
“Melt me”
With your heat.

I don’t expect that you would see
this loving blue-eyed gaze from me.
It’s too cold.
My flesh is frosted to the bone
but nothing is written in stone
so all I think is:

“Melt me”
Embrace my heart,
and don’t let it go.
“Melt me”
Wrap me up,
but take it slow.
“Melt me”
With your heat.

[Instrumental]

I want to give this thing a chance.
This love just jolts me with a lance,
but I’m afraid you’ll shun me.
I know this isn’t fair to you.
It’s like I’m sticking you in goo.
But all I feel is…

Your gaze; your touch; they’re all there.
They make me lose it everywhere.
I don’t know how you're doing this.
Your eyes emit this shining kiss.
Your voice is in my head
and  it’s searing me hot red.
And this ice has disappeared.

“Melt me”
Embrace my heart,
and don’t let it go.
“Melt me”
Wrap me up,
but take it slow.
“Melt me”
Embrace my heart,
and don’t let it go.
“Melt me”
Wrap me up,
but please take it slow.
“Melt me”
With your heat.

So now I guess you know
what you do to me.
Steal my breath like an undertow
and drag me to my knees.
The very sight of your face
makes obvious my desire.
My pick of all the human race,
submerge me in your fire.
:iconduelistgirl97:

Author's Comments

Sort of a WIP of a song I'm writing.

I have a basic melody in my head, but still have yet to start writing the music. :XD:

The lyrics took about...2 or 3 hours. And they're flexible...

Anyway, I based it around Seiji and Hisoka's relationship. If you read it while knowing that, it becomes quite obvious.
Except for the "girl" part...lol... That's just because it's obviously me who will be singing it.

I'd just like opinions... Please?

I sent it to one of my friends and he said it was good, but really cheesy...:XD:

Song (c) Kayleigh Edwards

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:iconteh-wolf:
It sounds amazing~ I can't wait to see the final lyrics~ You better record it too :iconiseewhatyoudidthere:

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~Joseph Frost Fan Girl~
:icontehvampire:
It sounds awesome, what kind of melody did you have in mind? Or is that a surprise? I can't wait to see/hear the finished version 8D :meow::clap::nod:

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:iconduelistgirl97:
Thanks. :3

It's kinda hard to type it out...:XD:

I have a rough vocal recording...^^'

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:iconduelistgirl97:
Thanks o3o

I will...:XD:
I have a rough vocal recording on my computer...nothing final, and no instruments...:XD:

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:lemon: When life gives you lemons... :lemon:
What more do you really need? ---> [link] <---
:iconteh-wolf:
your welcome o3o

Can't wait to hear it~:heart:

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Bearer of Rainbowsheep Of Doom


~Joseph Frost Fan Girl~
:iconemotionlessblue:
holy crap that is excellent! Whenever ya figure out the music you neeeeeed to record it! >W<

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:iconduelistgirl97:
Thank you so much! o3o :heart:
I will! :3
I need to get my music programme to install...I wanted to make it techno-y...:XD:

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:lemon: When life gives you lemons... :lemon:
What more do you really need? ---> [link] <---
:iconemotionlessblue:
oooo yes! o3o

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:iconkirbygotenksabsorbed:
This song is really good. *-*

"They make me lose it everywhere."

EVERYWHERE. :iconteheplz:

I thought this song was about you. ='D

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In the end, all that mattered was loading three people into a gun, and shooting the emperor with it.
:iconduelistgirl97:
Thanks, Hun. :3

EVERYWHERE.

lol, why?

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What more do you really need? ---> [link] <---

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